Poem a day challenge #83 (In Sickness and Hope)

Scott Andrew Bailey

In Sickness and Hope

By Scott Bailey © 2013

Tiredness saps me
Nausea weakens my soul
Hope is a hand up

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2 thoughts on “Poem a day challenge #83 (In Sickness and Hope)”

  1. gabrielablandy's avatar gabrielablandy Wed August 21 2013 / 11:58 am

    This is very good! I thought the descent of the first two lines a powerful contrast to that ‘lift’ in the last.

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    • Scott Andrew Bailey's avatar thehouseofbailey Wed August 21 2013 / 12:00 pm

      Thank you. Although it doesn’t qualify as a true Haiku I was trying to keep in with some of the spirit of one by having that contrast.

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